I hope you find your destiny
I hope you achieve your life’s dreams
While you navigate through life’s streams
I hope that life keeps you from harm
Ensuring your smile and your charm
Reaching a grand old age of calm
Safe in life’s palm
(C)- Vivian Zems
Today De hosting at dVerse. We are to write a poem of 44 words exactly (Quadrille #42) including the word hope.
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October 9, 2017 at 8:14 pm
I love the idea of being “safe in life’s palm.”
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October 10, 2017 at 12:19 am
Thanks 😊
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October 9, 2017 at 8:23 pm
sending such a hope for anyone is lovely.
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October 10, 2017 at 12:18 am
So right.
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October 9, 2017 at 8:42 pm
I specially like: Safe in life’s palm ~ Thank you.
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October 10, 2017 at 12:18 am
A pleasure 😊
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October 9, 2017 at 8:47 pm
It is a big bright hope to offer up.
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October 10, 2017 at 12:18 am
Indeed it is.
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October 9, 2017 at 9:20 pm
Big hugs go out to your heart. I hope you’re on to something; smile.
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October 10, 2017 at 12:34 am
Already there😆
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October 9, 2017 at 9:43 pm
You really can sink your teeth into this poem
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October 9, 2017 at 11:34 pm
Thank you!
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October 9, 2017 at 10:03 pm
That is what I hope for my children as well and anyone else in need of finding life’s palm.
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October 9, 2017 at 10:53 pm
Ah… yes, definitely.
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October 9, 2017 at 11:08 pm
From your mouth to God’s ear. So be it! A beautiful wish.
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October 9, 2017 at 11:14 pm
Ah-thank you☺
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October 9, 2017 at 11:54 pm
Lovely blessing!
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October 10, 2017 at 12:38 am
Like a prayer.
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October 10, 2017 at 12:44 am
Lovely intentions, well-rendered in tight rhythm and meaningful rhyme. Thank you!
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October 10, 2017 at 10:16 am
A pleasure!
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October 10, 2017 at 1:27 am
That was nice, it could be the inside of a greeting card. The verse and picture are quite well put together. It really does imbue a sense of calm
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October 10, 2017 at 10:15 am
I’m glad you liked it, thank you 🙂
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October 10, 2017 at 1:30 pm
Thank you Vivian
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October 10, 2017 at 2:00 am
Lovely. 🙂
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October 10, 2017 at 10:15 am
Thank you!
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October 10, 2017 at 2:33 am
Let it be so.
–Shay
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October 10, 2017 at 10:14 am
🙂
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October 10, 2017 at 7:37 am
So, beautiful andt hank you for sending these wishes……………………..
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October 10, 2017 at 10:13 am
Glad you like them 🙂
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October 10, 2017 at 7:52 am
Wow! Such a beautiful wish for everyone! your poem is full of hope and good wishes..lovely!
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October 10, 2017 at 10:13 am
Thank you 🙂
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October 10, 2017 at 4:55 pm
Reads like a beautiful poem….I’m reminded of the saying, “May God hold you in this palm of His hand.” 🙂
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October 10, 2017 at 6:27 pm
Thanks Lillian 😊That’s where I got it from!
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October 10, 2017 at 7:01 pm
While you navigate through life’s streams- this spoke to me, the streams were a little too deep for paddling today…I was fortunate that someone held out a hand to guide me through the difficult bit.
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October 10, 2017 at 7:21 pm
Thanks Alison 😊. Keep on paddling!
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October 10, 2017 at 8:46 pm
A lovely poem. For some reason, I thought of it as a message of hope from a parent to a child.
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October 10, 2017 at 9:09 pm
It has that flavour too. Thanks☺
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October 11, 2017 at 1:50 am
Words from a loving heart…..very nice.
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October 11, 2017 at 10:53 am
Thank you!
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October 13, 2017 at 2:54 am
I just read your wonderful words and my spirit was uplifted. Thanks for sharing your mantra of poetic hope. ❤
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October 13, 2017 at 8:05 am
Thanks, Olga, so glad you enjoyed it 😊
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November 7, 2017 at 2:06 am
This is beautiful! Thank you ❤ Nice to meet you — appreciate you visiting my blog. Blessings, Debbie
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November 7, 2017 at 7:48 am
Thank you😊
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