The Proposal

With the fading

Of a Foggy sunrise

He takes her by surprise

Looking deep into her eyes

“I want you to be mine

I want us together

Together till the end of time”

Getting on one knee

He produces a ring

The sight of which

Makes her heart sing

“I’ll be yours soon

You’ve always let me BE me

I’ll be yours soon

As soon as I’m free”

© Vivian Zems

Vivian Zems

Mum, author and dentist is how I describe myself. I love creating pictures from words. Sometimes a painter, other times a weaver- words are my tool; trying to create something beautiful. When I was nine, my dad introduced me to audio books. I was hooked. With his guidance, I fell into a world where words became life simply by weaving them together. So here I am, living out my passion- reading and writing! Enjoy the ride with me 😁😁

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August 2, 2017

Free verse poetry, Poems

Family, feelings, heart, Life, Marriage proposal, Ring, smell, Surprise, Together

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Ron.
August 2, 2017 at 6:46 pm

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Killer twist. Salute!

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- Vivian Zems
  August 2, 2017 at 7:16 pm
  
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  Thanks Ron!😊
  
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WaltPage
August 2, 2017 at 9:49 pm

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Is she married? In jail? Held captive by flesh eating bacteria? Tell me… Tell me… Telllllll meeeeeee!

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- Vivian Zems
  August 2, 2017 at 9:56 pm
  
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  Oooh Walt- this is where your imagination can go into overdrive- all your suggestions are possibilities!! 🙂 🙂
  
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HelsinkiBudapest
August 2, 2017 at 10:30 pm

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Damn! I was not expecting that twist. Now this will fester. In a good way. 🙂

Btw, I am following your blog, but my phone never notifies me of anything these days. Hence my sporadic replies / comments.

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Vivian Zems
August 3, 2017 at 9:51 pm

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No worries -always good to see you☺

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